this lips have said thousand lies
this ear have heard thousand deception
thus eyes have seen thousand despare in cries
this hands have vote thousand election.
What Happened?
to be civilize is to be organize
to be organize is to be recognize
Why?
no need any reason to comprehen
no need any excuse to care
no need any thought to share
no need any freedom to share
Society!!! ITS A CRUEL PLACE TO BE
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here I wrote back a correction for U to make it better, I'm so sorry if U get upset with this,,,
these lips have said thousand lies
these ears have heard thousand deception (we have two ears right?)
those eyes have seen thousand despair in cries (i did not find despare in the dictionary, but despair means KEPUTUS-ASA-AN)
these hands have voted thousand election.
What Happen? ---> u are asking dude, better to use present
to be civilized is to be organized
to be organized is to be recognized
(ed form, on of the making way to make nouns from verbs)
Why?
no need any reason to comprehen (comprehend, baby ... :> )
no need any excuse to care
no need any thought to share
no need any freedom to share
Society!!! IS A CRUEL PLACE TO BE
IS ---> not ITS dude!
COOL,,,
Indonesian says : KEREN :)
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